Thursday, October 1, 2009

Swish, I hear as I here the water spilling into my cup as I hold It under the Fasut. Then my cup is my filled. I snatch it away befor it overflows. Boom! Like a bom as I drop my first icecube into my cup. I hear it crackle and fizzz as I watch it in there. Then I drop my second one in. The 2 ice cubes fizz, crackle and squeek in unison as I watch them. So pure in the ice cold water. Like a winter mist I feel on my hand as the ice cubes make a small splash in the water. Not white. Not blue but a soft but so hard crystle clear ocean the way I see them. Like delicate glass hearts but really in the shape of funny looking tryangles. So misunderstood but so perfect icecubes...

2 comments:

  1. Olivia I really love how this poem is so detailed. My favorite sound was: The 2 ice cubes fizz,crackle, and squeek in unision as I watch them.

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