Monday, October 19, 2009

Hello

However I would
eat some more
later I ate now &
left to my
oval
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4 comments:

  1. Ben LamplOctober 19, 2009 at 8:46 PM

    I LOVE TO EAT!!!!!

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  2. Olivia KallaiOctober 19, 2009 at 9:43 PM

    Good post. I did not understand it but it was interesting and different. I also like how you put you golden line in gold. But I dont understand how your title has nothing really to do with you're poem.

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  3. Olivia KallaiOctober 19, 2009 at 9:44 PM

    Wait sorry for posting my earlier comment now I see that your spine word is Hello.

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  4. WilliamOctober 20, 2009 at 3:55 PM

    I like how your poem dosent realy flow.

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