Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Rain fall

While you eat your
pancakes and eggs on
a Saturday morning
you hear the crash of
the rain fall
as you feel free you hear
the rain get harder and
the rain get softer
and you feel your skin
start tingling
you also feel hair's on
your arm's stand up
as you turn on cartoon's
deafened by the sound
of rain pounding on the
roof
as you look up you see
the light gray sky squirting
out rain drop's
drip drop drip drop
as the rain keep's going




1 comment:

  1. I thought this was your golden line:
    as you turn on cartoon's
    deafened by the sound
    of rain pounding on the
    roof

    -tommy

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