Comments

I need comments on my poems the feeling rushing through you so eager for reviews on your work five stars four three two or one? you think its good but do they all the emotions on your peom not recognized soon to be seen

Lies

Lies are giant shadows over peoples hopes questions still not answered, Lies are giant boulders of nothing but trouble a minefield of opposites, fakes and hurt feelings collided soon to be found out, Lies are no spy in disguise  they are criminals revealed 

Dreams

I believe A dream is another dimension bieng opened in my sleep, a crazy place of everything you have always wanted and sometimes things you don't want you never know whats in a dreeam unless you have the key

Me

I am a doorway to a wonderland of emotions, and hopes, wonders of the rest of the world. Am I a shadow  or a light? I an not just a system of organs and cells- I'm more than that. Open the doorway to me.

School

Ever learning, ever wondering
always checking always working
all the qestions you have ever wondered or asked
to be answered
and you will be relieved
aceing that test