Thursday, October 15, 2009

Truce

Telephone rings,
Ravins sing, 
Universe twirling,
Creativity exploded,
Ends in golden letters, never forget me.
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4 comments:

  1. AnnaOctober 15, 2009 at 9:23 PM

    I thought this was a very good peom. I like the line where you said Universe twirling. I also like how it said ends in golden letters, never forget me and how it was actully golden. mWhat was your golden line?

    ~Anna

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  2. EvaOctober 19, 2009 at 8:10 PM

    your peom is very mystical

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  3. Olivia FalcoOctober 19, 2009 at 9:10 PM

    I think my golden line would have to be: ends in golden letters never forget me, because that kind of relates to truce, and is very touching!
    Thanks for responding to my poem guys, I really appreciate it!

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  4. TaliaOctober 20, 2009 at 3:40 PM

    Oliva, I really liked your poem! I agree with Eva your poem is very mystical!

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