Thursday, October 15, 2009

Juniper

Jellybeans melt,
Upper sky falls, 
Not able America,
Infinitesmall dust ,
Pony ride Sundays,
Enough rain in summer,
Roughly secret giggles.
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  1. AnonymousOctober 19, 2009 at 6:08 PM

    Dear Olivia,
    Even though I'm allergic to juniper I still fell head over heels when I read your poem. I think your golden line should be 'Upper sky falls'. I think if your poem could be a color it should be yellow.
    Sincerely,
    Tallulah

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  2. Olivia FalcoOctober 19, 2009 at 9:12 PM

    Thanks Tallulah, I like that line too and appreciate you commenting on my poem!

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