Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Force

Force isn't the answer but in
October there sometimes is more
rum than usual, and people
can get drunk and then
everyone has force.

1 comment:

  1. dear Max,
    this poem is great you couldn't add anything to it to make it better it's creative and amazing I think the golden line was 'force isn't an answer' this poem was great if I could grade this I would give it an A+ cep up the good work

    -tommy

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