As you fly the leafs of
an apple tree flutters beneath you
as you feel a new great
and no loneliness in your heart you
feel something different your hart races your
feet raise from
the ground it feel as if your flying your against gravity like love.
Tommy,
ReplyDeleteI really like this poem because I felt like I could fly. I could also really feel all the loneliness you describe. This poem is very emotional!
dear Max,
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment I really liked it thanks