Thursday, September 24, 2009

Without Words

Without words I couldn't tell
you my grandfather was on
the narrow grumbling about the buzzing-
stairs.You must remember the smell
of the pipe smoke whaling,yanking
our eyes from the sleepy blue.The
foot sorrow and summit song running
with the earth.You must remember
the sound of a love story injecting
venom and the radio blending
the curves and water the shape
of a sunburst being poured above

the trees.Remember the x-ray canvases
covering green skin and brown soap.
Remember the flutes off the the side
of a salt-lined cave and a ruby
and a pearl in a plain tree
no longer green underneath a cucumber
night melting into the pit.
A hairy scream even has a smile
in late spring.A scrape
of hangers under planted with roses.
But what I really want to say
is I'm leaving,going,gone

2 comments:

  1. I really agree on the golden line it is very good and I think there are a few more golden lines than that.
    Nice job

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  2. At first I didn't understand Levi's response. Ohhh! I really like the way you identified your Golden Line, Jayden. (Levi, you can stop laughing now.)

    The same words jumped out at me. I love "the sound of a love story injecting venom..."

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