lies a wonder filled valley,
with green here, green there,
and brown nowhere.
Past the hills there is a secret place,
and by the secret place,
there is a secret sea,
and in the secret sea,
there is a secret silver fish,
and on there secret silver fish,
there is a secret scale,
and the secret scale is flashing
fantastically with color.
And the secret scale,
is on the secret silver fish,
in the secret sea,
next to the secret place,
and all this is past the hills.
Past the hills there is a good place for life.
Past the hills a new life can be started.
I really like your poem. I think your golden line is probably: "Past the hills, lies a wonder filled valley, with green here, green there, and brown nowhere.
ReplyDelete--Tallulah
Golden line: Past the hills a new life can be started.
ReplyDeleteHey Eric great poem, but why didn't you call it secret ___________
ReplyDeletebecause you used secret a lot.
-Cole