Monday, September 28, 2009

Under the Surface



As I walk over green hills
the sun shines on the grass
that is creaked and creased.
Blowing in the wind
as the seeds and weeds
fly through under ground 
tunnels where the light-air 
ghost roams guarding a
mystery. But above lies
a great city were the rich
and the homeless sleep
in the night.

2 comments:

  1. Golden line:
    But above lies
    a great city were the rich
    and the homeless sleep
    in the night.

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  2. I like the line:Blowing in the wind
    as the seeds and weeds
    fly through under ground
    tunnels

    I like the sound creaked.

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