shimmer down
the moonlit street,
all laced up nice
and tight ready
to sprint
my high tops
so smooth
they make me run
like an angry
dog ready to
strike.
I start to run
I can't stop
I'm home
Finally I take
them off and
put them in
my closet to
rest for tomorrow.
I like your poem. Lots of detail. I like the idea of your shoes.
ReplyDeleteThis is Maia by the way.......
ReplyDeleteI agree with your golden line, they make me run like an angry dog ready to strike.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Patrick.
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