Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Glass

weak
bubbling and hardening
expanding

colorful panes
pearly sheets 
of blue
lifted into place

waiting
and waiting
then

CRACK
CRUNCH
CRRR
CAK
BANG

it shatters

the glass 
is no more

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3 comments:

  1. SamuelMay 20, 2009 at 4:24 PM

    I like how you added the sound effects.

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  2. AnonymousMay 20, 2009 at 4:31 PM

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  3. AnonymousMay 20, 2009 at 4:33 PM

    Ethan,
    I think your poem is very interesting. And it's cool how you made the poem with sound effects and how you made the lettering big then medium then small. I also like how you described the glass.

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