Wednesday, January 14, 2009

I am happy

What do you know. I am happy once more. Maybe if I stay happy until dinnertime, my SWEET, GENEROUS, MOTHER, will make me tacos and a smoothie for dinner. Or maybe if I stay happy all the way until breakfast time, I could have pancakes and bacon in the morning. Or...on second thought, being happy is too much work.
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  1. MaggieJanuary 17, 2009 at 7:23 AM

    What you wrote it really funny. I think that adding line breaks would make your poem flow better. You can also use your line break decisions to emphasis or de-emphasis words, such as "SWEET, GENEROUS, MOTHER" without resorting to capital letters. Give it a go, and see what how you think it works.

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