Tuesday, January 8, 2008

Stray Dog

I found it
whimpering
in the rain
It looked at me,
with big brown eyes
I took it in
that little
Stray dog
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3 comments:

  1. zoesportJanuary 8, 2008 at 1:24 PM

    That is a really deep poem. It acsually sounded like a poem that a real poet would write. Were you accsually writing about an experiance that happened to you? I think that the line breaks were in the perfect spot! WOW!

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  2. hartwell1January 8, 2008 at 1:34 PM

    No but I have seen a stray dog before.

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  3. AnonymousOctober 2, 2008 at 5:30 PM

    wow that poem like changed my emotions wow yeah that is a deep poem

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