Monday, January 7, 2008

Guilt

She invited,
me over
I came
We were having
a vast time

We had an adventure
through the prickly bushes
and falling leaves
of her backyard

We went to the,
treehouse
We kept a lookout

I could hear the,
screeching of tires and
the barking of dogs

She invited me to stay
Should I ? no
I left
and I felt
Guilt

1 comment:

  1. How would you compare or contrast your poem to Griffin's piece, Roller Coaster of Guilt?

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