This is your Roller Coaster of Guilt:
start here
your friend wants you to go
down here
you'll get in trouble
should you?
you choose
same friend
wants to help you
but
do you trust them?
(slow down)
I wish I took their advice
(really bummed)
same friend says sorry
you accept
end here
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Your last line wraps up the story of your poem very succinctly and I like that it leaves me feeling like, whatever the problem was, the person was able to regroup and move on.
ReplyDeleteHow would you compare or contrast your poem to Clare's piece, Guilt?
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