Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Braces

As I wake up all I think is I wish I had braces
as I walk down the street and see people with braces
all I think is I wish I had braces
as I look out the window and see someone with braces
all I think is I wish I had braces
as I read a book about a kid with braces all I think
is I wish I had braces
as I fall asleep all I think I wish I had braces
now I'm older and now I don't braces
and how do you even brush your teeth with braces

2 comments:

  1. Jackson, your poem was funny, and there was some repition. I like how your thoughts were easy to understand. Nice work!

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  2. I totally agree with Olivia.

    You dreamed about having braces?

    Just wondering,
    Tallulah

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