Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Around The Time

So clumsy for falling on all the glass tables and falling off the tall platforms I could find. I used to always want braces , and me and my friends would always talk about what color we wanted. I would be so happy 24.7 , and I would ride my pink razor in the house, watch t.v everyday at 4:00 and last of all look at my mom's daisy's in the kitchen everyday when I got home from school.
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  1. CardinaleNovember 3, 2009 at 4:58 PM

    I really liked your post and I thought it was interesting that you wanted braces.

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  2. LaudiNovember 4, 2009 at 4:14 PM

    Sydney I love your poem keep up the good work

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  3. AnnaNovember 4, 2009 at 4:14 PM

    Dear Sydney,

    I really loved your poem. I never new that you wanted braces. What was your golden line? I think it should be: I would be so happy 24.7, and I would ride my pink razor around the house. I really enjoyed the poem.

    ~Anna

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  4. Ben LamplNovember 4, 2009 at 4:48 PM

    I always wanted braces to.

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  5. sydney kuhnNovember 5, 2009 at 4:44 PM

    Dear anna,
    My golden line is the same as yours

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