Tuesday, October 30, 2007

my comlicated mind...

i-spy and baloney halloween cheesey frog that died under the birch pizza 5 kiwis that left the buisness sunny soccer basketball is comeing candy boston won the thief lord under the bridge tree construction toby step up on braces on red headband that fell blow my nose glasses on the pretty nose student what am i doing today back cream heven or hell chips on a blue eyes and brown hair-cute online gotta check my emails bballgall@gmail.com math decimals ...
halloween is tomarrow!

2 comments:

  1. Try some line breaks with this poem and see how it changes it. I love the stream of conscienceness, and I think that line breaks would make it have even more of an impact. Golden line: 5 kiwis that left the business

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  2. That was my favorite line too. What I did, was, just typed everything I was thinking. So my poem is supposed to be fast and hard to understand.

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