Thursday, October 1, 2009

Horses

My horse Sierra,
neighing when
some other horse calls.
Sierra, a flea bitten grey, mare, the same name a me,
horse.
Can be bratty but I can get her under control.
Jaz.
My best horse, old,flea bitten grey, mare,
GOOD LISTENING MARE.
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6 comments:

  1. Olivia KallaiOctober 1, 2009 at 7:09 PM

    Sierra I love your poem. It makes me want to go ride a horse or atleast pet one. I think you golden line would be:My best horse old,flea bitten grey,mare.

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  2. AnnaOctober 1, 2009 at 9:21 PM

    Sierra what does mare mean?
    My favorite sound that was not really sound was:My best horse,old,flea bitten grey,mare, GOOD LISTENING MARE

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  3. DavidOctober 6, 2009 at 4:34 PM

    How was that a sound poem?

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  4. Ms. Stacey :)October 17, 2009 at 2:08 PM

    Anna
    A mare is a 4 or older female horse

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  5. Ms. Stacey :)October 17, 2009 at 2:09 PM

    Maia
    I think its a sound poem

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  6. Ms. Stacey :)October 17, 2009 at 2:09 PM

    Olivia
    thanks I wish Jaz wasn't lame

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